moment 05 || choice A or choice B

A. Horizontal

When I first sketched out this illustration I intended the view to be orientated as an 'ironic' horizontal view, to emphasize the broken binding in the book. After scanning it, and a moment of reflection, I now wonder if it should be presented like this instead:


B. Vertical

—so the vertical slant of the figure gains focus rather than the book itself...

Pens: Micron 005, 01, 02, BR

Comments

  1. i still prefer the horizontal , David .
    seems to have more harmony .
    it is a good work .

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  2. Thanks for the opinion—I have discovered it is best to go with first instincts and not follow the "Internal Critic"—on occassion he has been correct... but not frequently.

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